I HATE THIS PAGE! I HATE IT I HATE IT I HATE IT!

Ah, that's better. Panels 1, 3, 4, and 5 suck! Pikapi's arms are too small, Azuri is too fat, Azumarill's arms are out of wack...and i suck at drawing crevices!

On a happier note, check out the last page for a Halloween special!

I thought it was rather cute <.<

Snowy: Thanks. I needed that.

Neogeorgia155: I like panel 2, and panel 1 is okay...but, thanks. I actually thought panel two rocked. I guess it balances everything out.

Yeah, not that bad. It's not too bad, don't worry. Not perfect, (as no one is,) but definitely nothing to worry a lot about.

A tip on Pikapi? Pikachu's red cheeks are bigger than its eyes. I think if you draw them bigger, that might help a bit. Just something I've noticed and thought might help. (Not one to talk . . .)

Yay, Vye is here! Thanks for the tip! I'll keep that in mind!

This is a cute comic :) I'll watch it~
I saw you commented on mine so I took a look at yours as well.

Thanks! Yours is cute too.

AWWWW!!! poor azumarril! i hope things work out!

Lol,The Azumarill's eyes in panel Five are awesome.

I LOVE THIS PAGE! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! All the panels ROCK! Pikapi's arms are the perfect size, as well as azuri, and don't get me started on the awesomeness of Azumarill's arms! The crevice totally looks 3D, and well drawn! It's not so easy to draw pictures that good! This is the best page yet! Do not insult your artwork. Why is it that YOU are the hard one to impress?! I know it's an artist thing to think your drawings could be better, but don't you think your overreacting a bit? I'm certain everybody loves this page but you! When I read your comics, I don't see any of your so called "mistakes"! All I see is a fine piece of work that blows me away! I bet you're glad to hear this comment from a fan! I hope this cheers you up and that your worries about this page just melt away!