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Oranges_and_Pears, November 9th, 2007, 5:27 am


Ah, that's better. Panels 1, 3, 4, and 5 suck! Pikapi's arms are too small, Azuri is too fat, Azumarill's arms are out of wack...and i suck at drawing crevices!

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Snowy, November 9th, 2007, 11:07 am

I thought it was rather cute <.<

Oranges_and_Pears, November 9th, 2007, 2:12 pm

Snowy: Thanks. I needed that.

Neogeorgia155: I like panel 2, and panel 1 is okay...but, thanks. I actually thought panel two rocked. I guess it balances everything out.

Vye Brante, November 10th, 2007, 3:12 am

Yeah, not that bad.
It's not too bad, don't worry. Not perfect, (as no one is,) but definitely nothing to worry a lot about.

A tip on Pikapi? Pikachu's red cheeks are bigger than its eyes. I think if you draw them bigger, that might help a bit. Just something I've noticed and thought might help. (Not one to talk . . .)

Oranges_and_Pears, November 10th, 2007, 11:32 am

Yay, Vye is here!
Thanks for the tip! I'll keep that in mind!

mene, November 11th, 2007, 2:51 am

This is a cute comic :) I'll watch it~
I saw you commented on mine so I took a look at yours as well.

Oranges_and_Pears, November 11th, 2007, 11:57 am

Thanks! Yours is cute too.

noriko_tachiki15, November 22nd, 2007, 8:49 pm

AWWWW!!! poor azumarril! i hope things work out!

Korbeh, December 11th, 2007, 7:04 am

Lol,The Azumarill's eyes in panel Five are awesome.

Ninja Voucu (Guest), November 15th, 2009, 12:39 pm

I LOVE THIS PAGE! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! All the panels ROCK! Pikapi's arms are the perfect size, as well as azuri, and don't get me started on the awesomeness of Azumarill's arms! The crevice totally looks 3D, and well drawn! It's not so easy to draw pictures that good! This is the best page yet! Do not insult your artwork. Why is it that YOU are the hard one to impress?! I know it's an artist thing to think your drawings could be better, but don't you think your overreacting a bit? I'm certain everybody loves this page but you! When I read your comics, I don't see any of your so called "mistakes"! All I see is a fine piece of work that blows me away! I bet you're glad to hear this comment from a fan! I hope this cheers you up and that your worries about this page just melt away!

00nothingat, May 11th, 2010, 10:49 am

This is just PMD Blue/ red Rescue Team, with a different character! Still, it's cool, and the drawings are good!

RS (Guest), October 8th, 2010, 10:36 am

The 3rd panel makes me sad for some reason.

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