Look at all dem Pokemon in the background. They took a long time. Pelliper looks pretty messed up. Oh well. The toolbox looks pretty good and I love how Azuri looks. Also the dialogue in the last three panels is awsome...and end chapter 1 finally! You guys are gonna love the cover page.

Wow, nice job in the first panel:

Chika, Pikapi
Bulbasaur, Meowth, Squirtle
Charmander, Cyndiquil, Totodile

WHOO!

Oh no! Pikapi! You're gonna die! I'm glad to see that the whole falling down a cliff and such didn't shake up Azuri too much. She's just taking a rest... :D

Good job with chapter un! Keep it up in chapter deux!

"Peliper looks pretty messed up"
No! He/she looks just fine! ^^

awesome :D and wow suspence...in a way

It's better than anything I can draw... :( I LOVE those last few panels. So... DRAMATIC!!! XD

Maeglin the Ninth: Yep, you got them all. Haha, I was too lazy to draw the Hoenn Pokemon and an Eevee. Figures.

Yeah, she seems pretty unfazed by this trauma.

Thanks! I'll try!

Ghost the Echidna: Thanks! It's just if you look at him I notice his wings are too short. Oh well.

Snowy: Yeah, a two-panel suspense.

Joshua: THANK YOU!

Yes, drama!

Wow, you're updating your comic really fast! I don't think I'd EVER be able to do that...

Thanks!

Yeah, without color it is a lot quicker!

Fawesome toolbox I dunno why it caught my attention... maybe 'cause it actually looks like a toolbox, rather than a weird designer bag, which is how I've been drawing it...

xD

Anyway, very cute, I can see you're getting better with expressions.

LOL Example pic is hilarious.